User:Rebekahfrese/Economic abuse/Echinacea10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rebekahfrese


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rebekahfrese/Economic_abuse?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Economic abuse

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I enjoy reading your work as it bring more information and intersectionality lens to the article. This is an interesting article as this issue has been occurs in society, but many people are still not aware of it. I think this piece is very helpful in explaining the situation, especially for those who are often underrepresented. Your added content is neutral and does not favor any position which is in accordance to Wikipedia rules. In terms of sources and references, I think you may would add some more citations in the statements you provided. For instance, on the job related impact section, the first sentence of the third paragraph does not have any backup source of information. The sentence is, "When economic solvency is required for independence, but an abuser has impeded the victim's efforts to work, the victim may turn to social assistance programs, like welfare, in an effort to gain some financial independence." In my opinion, this is informative but adding a reliable source would be meaningful. The second one is on the models to address economic abuse. Again, I think this is a valuable information especially for those who want to know how to work on the issue, so that would be beneficial to explain this further or at least provide the source. The last thing, I assume that IAIN may be an abbreviation that is common in the US, but it might be confusing for some who is not familiar with it. I consider you could either write it as American Indian and Alaska Native or link to this Wikipedia article AIAN (U.S. Census). Overall, your sources look great and you have improved the article by added more contents on economic abuse by bringing more information about gender, racial and welfare eligibility.