User:Rebraun17/Sale of Goods Law and Covid-19/Shawn Sullivan Depaul Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ryanne Braun - Sale of Goods Law and Covid-19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rebraun17/Sale_of_Goods_Law_and_Covid-19?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No current article exists

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think your article looks great so far! I commented on what I think you did well and had a few suggestions that might help you clear up the article for a person who has never heard of the UCC or understand legal terms.

Lead

The lead sentence is good but I think it may be a good idea to lead with the sentence about what the purpose of UCC article 2 is so the audience has a general idea of what the topic is. Overall, I think your writing makes sense as a lead paragraph.

Organization

In the first sentence I would identify that it is UCC "article 2" that every jurisdiction has adopted. In the second sentence I would use the phrase "provisions of the UCC" instead of "acts." In the third sentence I would identify that Illinois adopted the "model" UCC.

Content

All of the content you added is relevant for letting the reader know what the topic is about. Good job!

Tone and balance

The tone is appropriate for a Wiki article.

Cites

Your cites are all up to date for how new of a topic this is. You also meet the requirements for creating a new Wiki article.