User:RechnifKacz2/Streptococcus thermophilus/Maphouse8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

RechnifKacz2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RechnifKacz2/Streptococcus thermophilus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Streptococcus thermophilus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great start to adding to your article. There were a couple spelling mistakes (I believe it should be 'effects' instead of 'effects') but I wouldn't have really noticed if I wasn't actively reviewing. Organization is good so far, although that will become more important later when we have more that we have written. Content was also good and quite interesting. I suggest as you write more consider adding to the Classifications tab on the actual article (there was only one sentence there). Overall, great start!