User:Red027/Acute stress disorder/Will590 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Red027


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Red027/Acute stress disorder


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Acute stress disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I have to agree with Liz here, it is difficult to see how your contributions are going to fit into the article without some kind of context. The information itself looks like a solid addition to what is already there, but fit and flow need to be considered as well. It might also help reinforce your contribution if you were to have some more substance to them.

Hello. Thanks for the peer review. I have brought over more of the article to give it context. My contributions are in bold. - Spencer