User:RedRunner3/Iowa State Penitentiary/Payton Brodie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing

RedRunner3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RedRunner3/Iowa_State_Penitentiary?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iowa State Penitentiary

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * The lead has been updated with current information
 * The lead clearly and concisely describes the article's topic
 * The lead does not include a list of the article's main sections
 * Information in the lead is present in the article


 * For the length of the article, the lead is concise

Content


 * The new content is relevant to the topic
 * The content added is up to date
 * In the sandbox, there does not appear to be missing information
 * This article does not deal with an equity gap

Tone and Balance


 * Content added is neutral
 * No heavy bias is present
 * No points are over or underrepresented
 * There is no persuasion

Sources and References


 * All new content has reliable sources
 * Content is accurately represented from its sources
 * The sources chosen are thorough, but there are more scholarly articles available on Google Scholar about the topic or related topics
 * Sources are current
 * Most sources give no author information, but are state or government-owned websites
 * More sources are available on Google Scholar
 * All links work

Organization


 * Content is easy to follow and concise
 * One misspelling of the word "access"
 * Content is well-organized

Images and Media


 * Peer did not add image(s)

Overall Impressions


 * The content soon to be added will improve the article
 * Added citations and updated information on the current warden improve the article's accuracy and reliability. The new edits also clarify the difference between the old penitentiary which was closed down in the last decade.
 * A quick search on Google Scholar will help find articles that give more information on the recreational activities and opportunities for inmates. I would also advise adding hyperlinks to Southeastern Community College and United States Department of Labor if they have their own pages.