User:Redshirt111/Gunpowder/Chem0111 Peer Review

There wasn't much information added, but considering the information that was added it did not flow well with the paragraph it was inserted into. " When the correct proportions are used, this mixture can lead to Gunpowder has been widely used as a propellant i, which gives it the very real potential to launch an object forward. The correct proportions used to produce this result are roughly 10% sulfur, 15% charcoal, and 75% saltpeter. Because of this, gunpowder". This is all I could find that was added into the article.

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