User:Redsoxs33/Solar energy/Hla19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Redsoxs33/Solar energy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Solar energy

Evaluate the drafted changes
A little bit more of elaboration on the first paragraph or even combine it with the second paragraph.

There are some grammar errors present:

Photovoltaics as states --> Photovoltaics as stated

This is way --> This is why

Although, renewable --> Although renewable

Ultility-scale --> Utility-scale

Overall a great start.