User:Redsoxs33/Solar energy/Springfrog32 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Redsoxs33


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Redsoxs33/Solar_energy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

References: your references look like good peer reviewed sources, good job picking them out.

I like the stance that you are taking about the downsides of solar energy. This is important to talk about since wiki emphasizes its unbiased viewpoint on everything, so adding the other side to this article will be beneficial. These are effects that I have not heard of before, so I think it is really important that you share them. I think your paragraphs are well written and flow clearly.

It is hard to say whether this is adequate amount of the opposite stance, since I only saw your draft and not how it fit in to the rest of the article.