User:Redwood432/Herb Lubalin/Mackcato Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Redwood432


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Redwood432/Herb Lubalin


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Herb Lubalin

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I like how you expanded on his early life. I feel like more works of his could be added and maybe expand more on his education (ex. where he went/ what he studied).