User:Reemslim/July 2013 Beirut bombing/Martinapovolo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Reemslim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing User:Reemslim/July 2013 Beirut bombing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * July 2013 Beirut bombing

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content: The added content is really good and in-depth! I can tell you well-researched this topic and are very knowledgeable.

Tone and balance: There is a neutral tone to this article, which is great! No need to work on tone or balance.

Sources and references: You only have one reference, which is fine, but I think verifying your information in more than once place would be very helpful. I also think you should make a reference section would help make this more clear. The source is also from 2013, which is a bit less recent than is preferred. There are also no links to refer back to, so it was hard for me to follow the information.

Organization: I believe this is the section you need to do the most work on. There is no headers to differentiate sections, which makes the information you wrote harder to follow and identify. Some headers should do the trick!

Images and Media: There aren't any, but I don't think it's necessary sine it would be graphic.

Overall impressions: Great content, needs more help with structure and organization!

- Martina