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Article Evaluation: Alcoholism
Everthing in this article seems to be relevant to the topic and most of the article has a neutral viewpoint. Most of the citations work and are relative to the topic and strongly support the information listed in the article. Nothing seems to be out of date and all the references seem reliable. The Alcoholism article is listed as a level 3 vital article snd is rated as GA class. The article is also of intrest by the Addictions and recovery, medicine / translation / toxicology, and South Africa/PSP SA Wikiprojects. I believe that the first topic in this article which is titled Early Signs is underpresented and is lacking information, therefore I plan to add some valuable information to the subtopic and cite it

Before: Early signs
The risk of alcohol dependence begins at low levels of drinking and increases directly with both the volume of alcohol consumed and a pattern of drinking larger amounts on an occasion, to the point of intoxication, which is sometimes called "binge drinking". Young adults are particularly at risk of engaging in binge drinking.

After: Early signs
The risk of alcohol dependence begins at low levels of drinking and increases directly with both the volume of alcohol consumed and a pattern of drinking larger amounts on an occasion, to the point of intoxication, which is sometimes called "binge drinking". Young adults are particularly at risk of engaging in binge drinking. Also, if you find yourself or others partaking in drinking activities rather than fufliing your burdens and importances, this is a direct sign of the oncoming of alcohol abuse.