User:Reesedog15/African feminism/Mahaletn Peer Review

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Reesedog15


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 * User:Reesedog15/African feminism


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 * African feminism

Lead
Your article has a very strong lead. It concisely defines African Feminism and goes on to describe other names for afro-feminism. I like how you segue into feminism from other countries and how it compares to African feminism. Overall, this is a very strong lead. It mentions the info needed for the article without going overboard. If you wanted, you could add a quick sentence including the major sections for the article.

Content
I think your added "need for african feminism" section really improves the overall Wikipedia page. It mentions needed information like what African feminism must address and also the issue with the terminology of African Feminism that aren't mentioned in the rest of the article. I like your topic for Islamic feminism. It brings in a new religious perspective while still staying relevant to the article since Islam is dominant in Africa. I'm not sure if you're finished with the examples, but it would be nice to list out some from countries outside of Kenya/East Africa. Other than that, your examples were very diverse while still staying relevant to feminism. Good job!

Tone
The tone was neutral the entire time and does not attempt to persuade readers at any time. I think once you add more theories outside of Nigeria/West Africa to the Principles of African Feminism section you'll be good!

Sources and References
Your sources are all in the correct format. There's a good mix of sources from African women and non-African authors as well. From the ones I checked, they are peer-reviewed and seem trustworthy too. If anything, you can add more but I think that'll come naturally as you continue updating the article.

Organization
The article reads well and there doesn't appear to be any grammatical issues. Depending on how much you add to your "principles of African feminism" section, you could add sub-sections to it to make it easier to read. Other than that I think you've done a really good job with your article!

Reesedog15 Response
Thanks for this helpful feedback! I'll be sure to add a quick sentence introducing major sections in the article to the lead. I'll also continue to add more specific content on branches of African feminism from different countries/regions of Africa. I'll also continue to add more sources as I work. Again, thanks so much for this helpful peer review! I wish you the best of luck with your article.