User:Reesepitch/Hong Song-dam/Poppyprint Peer Review

Jack, the short section you have is very promising and will be an extremely important contribution, but please note that you need more content and a proper list of sources cited. You actually have a series of useful sources in English from class (including the recommended readings for Sohl Lee's talk) and I would really like to see you use them. I am concerned that you will not be able to receive proper feedback on your full article draft (and I also want you to receive the credit for the final assignment, but this does not meet the length or content) - please complete this as soon as possible. You should also clearly indicate for your reviewers the sections you have added.

* You should also discuss Hong's work in the context of Minjung art, and link it:

Minjung art

Many of Hong's works in the 1980's (1980s - remove apostrophe) dealt with the acts committed by the Seoul government under Chun Doo-hwan's dictatorship (remember to link!). Hong's works showcase a rough timeline, (not sure what you mean by "showcase a timeline" - follows a rough timeline?) starting with the Gwangju uprising in May of 1980 (link!) and continuing for the next few decades, even following his imprisonment in 1987. This imprisonment was based on charges of collaborating with North Korea after he designed (painted or designed?) a mural critical of South Korean life (<- would love more details on the mural here or what you mean by "critical of South Korean life").

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