User:Reethespiethes/Asylum in the United States/KautharIbrahim Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ruth's Asylum in the United States Contribution


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Reethespiethes/Asylum_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asylum in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Currently don't see a lead updated yet.

Content

Overall, I really liked the content that you had added and it is relevant to the article. All of the sources are up to date and were linked correctly. I also believe that adding the effects of refugee's mental health because if the asylum process is an important social issue that we all should be aware about. Overall, really good job with the content!

Tone and Balance

Your edits to the article have a neutral point of view. The content doesn't persuade me to favor one view point over the other. I like that you put links to other articles so that we can get more perspectives on the topic.

Sources and References

The links work and the sources are up to date. There could be more sources on the third paragraph where you talk about the power imbalances between the asylum seekers and legal professionals. I feel like there could also be an added source where you talk about the issues of translation.

Organization

Overall, the content is well organized, and easy to read. The topics are organized in a concise way and is placed in the article strategically.

Images and Media

There are no images included in the article, but I don't believe it is necessary to include any.

Overall Impressions

Organization, Content, and grammer are all good in your edits of the article. Just adding a couple more sources in the third paragraph would make it even better! Awesome job!