User:Reggie234/Born to Be Bad (1934 film)/Emily.rose827 Peer Review

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When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that were confusing to you.


 * - The plot description reads great! I was just wondering about the ending. I started getting into the movie but it seemed to have left on a cliffhanger. I want to know more! Like what happened to Letty, what happened to her son?! But if thats the end of the movie then dang. I'm left with so many questions! The plot is fantastic though! If there is anymore to the movie I would add that in, but if there isn't then I would make it clear that was the end of the movie. You did a great job though!

Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or events?

- Yes! All of the actors and actrices have external links going to their Wikipedia page! There are even links to words or concepts that aren't common and that some people don't know about. I really appreciate that! And links to other places as well!

Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?

- Yes, there are! There are good reviews that really show how the people and reviewers perceived the movie back then, and there is background to the movie as well, and in the section it provides external links to some of the facts. If you can find anymore recpetions I would add those in there too! (It's totally fine if you can't find any though!)

Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?

- Grammar looks great!

Any other comments on the entry?

- This was great! I could understand the article clearly and it was easy to follow! I just want to know if that's the end though!!! You did amazing! Great job!

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