User:ReginaPhalange4/The BBC Advisory Committee on Spoken English/GoKnights2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ReginaPhalange4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ReginaPhalange4/The BBC Advisory Committee on Spoken English


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:ReginaPhalange4/The BBC Advisory Committee on Spoken English

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think your draft is well written and has reliable sources. You have great organization so far. It think it may be interesting to include some of the original words that were explained by the BBC. I also think you could add some more info to your "today" section and include some other groups that may exist today with a similar purpose like the BBC's. I also think another section that could be added is its impact on communication world- are there any rules or guidelines that were created because of this groups mission? GoKnights2021 (talk) 21:57, 19 October 2021 (UTC)