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Luke has peer reviewed Jose's Article.

Assignemnt 9

The feedback that I have received from one of my classmates and from a Wikipedia expert has opened my eyes to see new ways that I an tackle my article and ways to clean up certain mistakes that I have made. The Wikipedia expert mentioned that I should write in a way that my article should complement the current article on my topic. I should do this because I can then mold it in a way that I can direct someone to the main article if they need more information on my article. For my classmates adivce, he mentioned that I should come up with new development within the AGI field, which would fit well into my article because AGI is a futuristic type of technology. Overall, the critiques I got is definitely setting me up in the right direction.