User:Rehema.karanja/Echinus (sea urchin)/MadisonOliver7 Peer Review

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Rehema.karanja
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Section 2: It says that 11 to 28 is no longer considered accurate but does not include what the accurate ages or estimates are.

Section 3: Sentence two could be split into two sentences of reworded. If split the second half of the sentence could be combined with the third sentence. "Their development is based on depth" - based could be changed to dependent.

Section 4: Echinus sea urchins suspension feed by using ciliary band that extends across the body of the pluteus, removing particles from any surface. is that supposed to be a ciliary band or ciliary bands? "Confined by the pedicellaria of the sea urchin" you may want to define pedicellaria if it is not defined in a previous section of the article. "Strongylocentrotus purpuratus, also known as the purple sea urchin, is an herbivorous feeder like some Echinus sea urchins." this part is unnecessary since it is already stated in the sentence before it.

Section 5: " consisting a nerve rings" the grammar needs to be fixed on this. "two types of neurons have been found in the central nervous system of these species from a study of, "Neurobiology of Echinodermata", which contain acetylcholine and dopamine/ noradrenaline." - the study does not have to be included in this sentence since it is already cited.