User:Reidtosa/Phronima sedentaria/Ifrenette Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Reidtosa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Reidtosa/Phronima sedentaria
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Phronima sedentaria

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks like you've updated it to match what you've added, although it is a little wordy in some parts where it could be more concise and then expanded on in the main sections. I like the overall tone of the article. Adding in the part about not being entirely certain about symbiotic relationships makes it seem very neutral for some reason. However the first paragraph of Ecology starts with talking about symbiotic relationships then goes on to talk about the barrel-like bodies of females and then returns to symbiotic relationships so maybe you could rearrange those sentences to flow better.

Your sources look reliable, unbiased, and current and your links work. I've added some links to other wikipedia pages, but you it might be useful to add more to terms that wouldn't be known by average people. I've made some changes to grammar, but I may have missed some so I would go through and reread to make sure. The image you used was helpful and it adheres to Wikipedia guidelines. If you can find more images of the species it would be even better.