User:ReignInSupremeDarkness/Telescoping (mechanics)/Zrivera5 Peer Review

Review:

article needs to be reviewed by ReignInSupremeDarkness, and an outline/plan needs to be formulated on what to add, then a peer review would be appropriate

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)