User:ReimyLi/Ionel Rotaru/Madisonokon Peer Review

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Lead Peer Review
- I would probably add in more context about the historical opression of the Romani people as well as the specific organizations Rotaru founded.

Early Life Peer Review
- It might be helpful to add in some more historical context of how/why the Romani people were persecuted by the Nazis. You could also add some more background about the long history of persecution the Romani people faced, even before the Nazis came to power. Adding in some secondary sources on this will also help you meet the notability requirement.

- It might be good to add another section about Romani history in Europe. I think if you outline the oppression the Romani people faced, it would give some background as to why an advocate for the Romani, like Ionel Rotaru was needed.

- This section did a great job outlining the timeline of early events in Ionel Rotaru's life, even though the information on this is very limited. It was also concise, easily understandable, and gave a good overview of Rotaru's early life.

Romani Activism Peer Review
- The Supreme Leader of the Gypsies did a good job describing Rotaru's ceremony, as well as the impact that the event had on different groups throughout Europe.

- I was wondering if the quote "in a ritualistic event that captured the imagination of the public” came from a primary source. Technically we aren't supposed to directly quote anything and instead have to paraphrase. I think you can get the same point across by paraphrasing this and citing the original author.

- I thought you did a really good job of explaining the impact Rotaru's activism had on the Romani and greater European community.

Romani Flag
- I thought this section was highly interesting! You probably have an opportunity to add in a picture of the Romani flag later on

- I think you may have the same issue here with the quotations, it might be easier to resolve once you add in citations though.