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Make A small Edit
Asian American Movement Article.

Split up the "Early Developments" section into multiple sub sections: Movement Origins, Early Developments, Height of the Movement, Legacy

Height the Movement
The Asian American movement reached its peak in the late 1960s to mid 1970s. Activism in this period grew dramatically following global and foreign events, such as the decolonization of the Third World and the Vietnam War.

Articles Evaluated
Article 1: "Asian American Movement" https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Asian_American_movement

Article 2: "Japanese sound symbolism" Japanese sound symbolism

Evaluations
Asian American Movement

This is a good start to the topic, but could be improved with more information in general. The article is quite short, and the existence of an "early developments' sub-heading probably necessitates the addition of subheadings for the middle and later stages of the movement as well. The article is also limited in its discussion of the social and political outcomes/achievements of the movement. I feel that the formatting of the page could be improved as well, perhaps by mimicking a similar format the the Black power wikipedia article. — RekishiKyoushi (talk) 18:29, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

Japanese Sound Symbolism

I think this article would be greatly aided by an overhaul of the example chart. It may be more beneficial to have examples broken up by category, with a column for giongo, gitaigo, giseigo, and gijougo. One of the most interesting aspects of Japanese mimetics is how frequently they are used compared to other languages, especially in medium like advertisements and manga. The addition of this information may also benefit the article.-RekishiKyoushi (talk) 00:03, 4 April 2023 (UTC)