User:Remchar88/Non-Zero Probabilities (short story)/Hmleonard Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Remchar88


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 * User:Remchar88/Non-Zero Probabilities (short story)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead is concise and mentions everything present in the article except for "Themes and Motifs." Maybe you can add a quick mention of that. Lead is not overly detailed. Good length. The mentions of the Hugo and Nebula Award as well as the anthology should have sources. Other than that, looks great! You can spice it up by adding links to other articles, like having "N.K. Jemisin" go to her Wiki page, etc.

Content: Content is great. Everything is relevant to the topic and looks up-to-date. It even deals with equity gaps because of the story's focus on heritage and beliefs and author is a WOC. When researching this short story I didn't find anything that could be missing from the article. Everything is touched upon-- plot, themes, background, and recognition.

Tone and Balance: The article is written in a neutral tone. I do not see any bias.

Sources and References: Everything appears to be from reliable and recent sources, although there is one source that is from Blogspot. It is written by somebody who is a Hugo nominator, so might be okay. All the links worked for me and the content accurately reflects what the sources say. Couldn't find any other sources that could be used in the article-- mostly just blog posts. Make sure to add sources to your lead like I mentioned above.

Organization: The content is very well-written. I didn't find any spelling or grammar errors. In the Plot Synopsis section, there is some repetition like saying someone "is skeptical" twice and frequent use of the word "event." Article is organized and broken down into various sections. Looks great.

Other: This is a new article but it meets notability requirements. There are reliable sources and the short story was nominated for awards. It follows the patterns of existing articles on short stories so it will fit right in when published. There are no links to other articles, so that could be something you can add. A lot of articles have a "See Also" section at the end of the article so that might be nice! Also make sure to add links to other articles within your own article. I recommend linking N.K. Jemisin, Clarkesworld Magazine, Hugo award, Nebula award, How Long 'til Black Future Month?, 2004 World Series, Saint Christopher, and orishas. Overall I really love this article.