User:Remchar88/Non-Zero Probabilities (short story)/Mcwright1981 Peer Review

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Remchar88


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 * User: Remchar88/Non-Zero Probabilities (short story)


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: the lead is clear, but I did not really understand what "where the laws of probability have shifted," meant. I had to google law of probability to try and understand. It is precise and gives a good outline of the stories highlights.

Tone and Balance: I read no bias in the article. The tone was neutral and the article only served to inform.

sources: you have a lot of good sources.

Overall I think this article is very well done. The plot synopsis is not overly written with excessive details and I get that these are the high points of the high points. it makes me want to read the story.