User:Ren.Wall/Deafness in Japan/Organism438 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ren.Wall


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Deafness in Japan
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Lead has not been added.

-Content: The content in each section is really good with plenty of facts and details as well as cited sources. The tone is very neutral and follows Wiki's policy. Plenty of organizations and details about them. I like how the human/civil rights section is organized into different parts. Information is also pretty up to date within the past 5 years. The timeline is also a great addition and makes it easier to see the order of events. There are also links to other relevant wiki pages. The sections also make it easy to find specific information through the content table.

-Sources: The links that I happened to click on worked and brought me to the information that is in the wiki page. Some sources are very current others are a bit older.

Overall the wiki page seems very well written and polished. The information is very informative and the sources are well cited.