User:Ren18838/Jeannie Donohoe/Dylanmcallister Peer Review

General info
Ren18838
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jeannie_Donohoe
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Lead is concise and to the point.

Content:

The content is relevant to the topic and fits in well after the lead.

Tone and Balance:

The article is neutral and does not share any personal views or beliefs. It does not favor any specific belief, it is neutral.

Sources and References:

The sources should all meet Wikipedia's guidelines, some going into to a surprising amount of depth about the filmmaker.

Organization:

The content is generally well written, however there is a few very minor grammatical errors with missing commas and the like. No mistakes detract from readability or tangibility.

Images and Media:

The article does not have any images or media, the inclusion of these would undoubtedly benefit the article.

Overall Impressions:

The article seems notable enough to be featured on Wikipedia, the list of sources seems to be quite comprehensive given the subject. This article semes ready for publication, but just needs a second read for grammatical issues. The only larger change I would suggest would be adding pictures.