User:Reneemessinger/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Law enforcement in India

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
My chosen research topic is centered around the IPS, so this article is helpful to evaluate and gain a broader knowledge on Indian law enforcement, especially on the federal level.

Evaluate the article
This article mainly focuses on the powers, roles, and duties of federal and state governments when it comes to enforcing the law as well as how India protects itself against outside forces. Going into the article, there was not a very strong lead section. The first sentence is not very informative and could use a beginning with more of an overview to let the reader know what the article is about. The rest of the article is concise and clear with no noticeable spelling or grammatical errors, when pertaining to Standard American English. The start of each content section includes a definition that tells the reader the subject of the section. I don’t have enough knowledge on the subject to add any relevant, up-to-date information. It’s factual and organized, and it reflects well on its authors’ knowledge.