User:Reneemessinger/Indian Police Service/Aakashpathak1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Reneemessinger


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Reneemessinger/Indian_Police_Service?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Indian Police Service
 * Indian Police Service

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the above work appears to be a good starting point for a Wikipedia article on the Indian Police Service (IPS). The above work on the Indian Police Service (IPS) includes important information about the challenges and responsibilities faced by IPS officers, which highlights the complexity and importance of their role in society. Additionally, by including references to external sources, the article demonstrates a commitment to providing credible and reliable information to readers.

However, if I have to nitpick some changes, I would just suggest to maintain a neutral point of view by either adding more sources, or using a little more measured language. Overall great additions!