User:Renette776/Big Purr (Prrdd)/Mmpqv5 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BlackIce0021, Dubosem, Renette776


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Big Purr (Prrdd)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Big Purr (Prrdd)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi. Great choice of a topic. Very simple and to the point throughout (in a good way). The lead is good, concise and explains the topic well. There is a neutral stance throughout, even when explaining the controversy of the song. The content that is added is relevant to the topic I do have a suggestion regarding the body would be to maybe explain more how Coi Leray is part of an underrepresented population (ie, woman in rap maybe?). According to the peer review prompt it asks how this page deals with Wikipedia's equity gaps so I thought maybe adding info on that could help to explain it better. Also, my only other suggestion would be to add a bit more content, if possible. I know the topic is short as it is a song but if I could suggest maybe adding the meaning behind the lyrics or what the song is about? You could also add any interviews about the song or why it was written. Everything else is good though. I also am not sure I peer reviewed this entirely correctly, so my apologies if that is the case.