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Tutorial 1

Today’s Date: 17 March 2019

Article name: Saint Fin Barre's Cathedral

Number of page views in last 30 days: 1,703

Daily Average of page views: 72

Total number of edits: 1,361

Tutorial 3

Activities 1 The article "Dalby Olympic Swimming Pool" has been rated as c-class on the quality scale. This article need add more relevant content about topic. Meanwhile, the quality of referenced resource is a little bit low and it might need more types of reliable sources to record article. And the content of this topic is not cover the important part of it.

Tutorial 4

Activity 2 The oldest page for Jack Ma Website:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jack_Ma&oldid=20807665

If I had created this article, I will add more information and recognize the information in different parts of the Jack Ma. The article contain the basic information for his business, including education background, name and mainly working experience. It is too short to detail. In my point of view, it need add more information about personal experience and his career experience, especially his company. Meanwhile, all information claimed in one paragraph not provide a good vision. And therefore, it need to divide into several group. This article is talked about a person, so it might need a photograph to show how he look likes.

Tutorial 5

Activity 1 I have saw the wiki page"University of Sydney". I might describe sub-session campus. It divide in several parts in this session including library. It might can be introduce in my topic. For the way to describe the history of college, it might can separate different period for history. This might help reader to read.