User:Revengemin Button/Catholic Church in Chile/JS1833 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Revengemin Button


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Revengemin Button/Catholic Church in Chile


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Catholic Church in Chile

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, really great job keeping things concise and neutral, and there is a lot of great information here. You do a really great job with the number of articles linked throughout, making it easier for you to put out information without needing to really describe each aspect in depth.

Just a couple of grammar things:


 * 1) "First" is capitalized about halfway through the first paragraph, but I'm not sure if it was intentional
 * 2) I think the last sentence of the first paragraph could be broken up into 2 or 3, with each mentioning the specific statements issued.