User:Reyna2061/ECMIA/Jackieh4155 Peer Review

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This is a great draft. As I was checking off the list of key aspects, they were all checked off. I think the timeline aspect was a great addition, especially for a more visual learner. Adding to that, I would just recommend adding any pictures of the organization. I see that there is one, but it looks to be just of the UN. Another great addition would be more details on their international reach.

Overall, it looks amazing and filled with lots of information that is unbiased.