User:Rezwanas/Butter cookie/Annapiwko27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rezwanas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rezwanas/Butter_cookie?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Butter cookie
 * Butter cookie

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information that has been added is relevant, and includes useful information about Danish butter cookies. I did not see any grammatical errors, all of the information is cited and it is easy to read. The only sentence that I was unsure about was, "Butter cookies hold a special place in people's heart not only for their nostalgia but also for the flavor which is derived from the high quality ingredients". This sentence may be assuming of information about people and their opinions, however I think that it fits into the paragraph well. Additionally, it might be beneficial to replace the phrase, "Known by most" with something else. This phrase insinuates commonality, however the reader might question what exactly most is defined by. The content that you have added definitely improves the quality of the article by adding valuable, accurate information to further the audiences' knowledge about butter cookies. I think that you did a really nice job finding quality information, and weaving it into a cohesive paragraph.