User:Rezwanas/Butter cookie/Hmerzai Peer Review

General info

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Rezwanas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rezwanas/Butter cookie


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Butter cookie

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft version explains the point of the topic in a very plain and easily understandable manner. The added section looks ver relevant to the overall article point. The overall grammatical and sentence sequence look great. The tone of the draft is very neutral and gives pure information. The references given are accurate and the links are working well. The sources used for the draft are reliable.