User:Rfr5240/Virtual reality therapy/Carly4B Peer Review

Peer review

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Rfr5240


 * Corrects grammar and fixes some wording to help make some parts of the article read more clearly
 * Added a link to exposure therapy to allow the reader the opportunity to read more on the topic and then have a greater understanding of the VRT article.
 * Added a photo to help demonstrate exposure and virtual reality therapy.
 * Added a section about Gynecological surgery as another way to use VRT. I think this is a valuable addition as it helps readers understand further implementations of the technology.
 * There's a couple spots in the article that say they still need a citation, so this could be a good thing to address while editing.