User:Rgcowboys/2022–23 St. John's Red Storm men's basketball team/Karenmegalaa Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?)

Rgcowboys


 * Link to draft you're reviewing Editing
 * Editing User:Rgcowboys/2022–23 St. John's Red Storm men's basketball team - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2022–23 St. John's Red Storm men's basketball team - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think the changes made to this article were great. There was also a chart provided with factual evidence and statements to support it. My peer did not provide an introduction sentence just yet. The lead does include a description of the article's major sections as he discusses one of the team's greatest coaches. The lead includes new information and not one that's already provided in the article. There are not any sources provided just yet. If I were you i would add more information about the team players as well. The content added is up to date and relevant to the topic.