User:Rgodek518/Anolis proboscis/Bush 007 Peer Review

Anolis proboscis

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Rgodek518


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rgodek518/Anolis_proboscis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anolis proboscis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked how you corrected the morphology of the species so that It would be clearer and more specific. You also found recent sources to back up this data. Maybe you could go more into depth about the color scheme of the lizard and cover the more frequent color patterns that the lizards display if they have a pattern. A diagram of potential colors would also help readers. I also think that you should add content to the diet section. I think that it would be better if It covered what group of animals is its prey rather than a few random examples. Also you do the same with the plants that it eats. Even if you just add what size their food has to be for them to consume it. Another issue that might be able to clarify is to combine courtship, copulation, and the conflict between males into one main section. I think that those three sections are pretty much covering the same thing and that they could be combined underneath mating behaviors. One small that I also noticed is that I think that some of the lizards names in the lead should be capitalized.

I like how you added sources from the current year back up the changes that you made. I'm not sure if it is a mistake but I think that the same source is cited twice.