User:Rh915119/Refugees from Ivory Coast/Emma.Fagan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Rh915119


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rh915119/Refugees from Ivory Coast


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
No lead section yet, consider adding one!

Content
Content is well-researched, notable, and addresses an equity gap. Content in the "Causes" and "International Aid" sections could be more explicitly linked to the refugee crisis. I'd also appreciate some sort of summary of the crisis as a whole earlier in the page (likely the lead section would be best). Consider moving information about the number of Ivorian refugees to the beginning of the page before diving into the history.

Tone and Balance
All good! Your tone is neutral and information seems balanced.

Sources and References
More than sufficient number of academic sources, which all seem thorough and fairly recent. I'd enjoy more information on the current state of the refugee crisis, but that information may not be available in the academic literature yet.

Organization
Sections are well-delineated, grammar is good for the most part! Some small errors (periods, commas, etc.) but those are easily fixed :) Make sure citations go outside the period, instead of inside! And if multiple sentences in a row use the same source you can just wait till the end of the last sentence to cite.

Overall impressions
Good draft of a new article! Looking forward to seeing the finished product!