User:Rhiannongro/Women's Memorial March/Griib Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rhiannongro's work Reviewing Women's Memorial March


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rhiannongro/Women's Memorial March


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women's Memorial March

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, here are my peer review observations:

I see the table of content has been updated in this draft to reflect more detailed and relevant sections. It addresses the Wiki equity gap.

Good replacement of the quote in the Women's Memorial March section and added information about the territories the march is situated on. It looks like all statements are backed up with footnotes to references except some from the Culhane article that only have the page number. Most of the sources are of the last 5 years.

I'm guessing the freestanding quotes will be transformed as paraphrases, and the keywords will transform into full sentences shortly to fill in the sections. Once all of it will be added, the article will definitely be more complete and reflect a more global point of view. Looking forward to see what the Vancouver's Downtown Eastside section will look like!