User:Rhinobear/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Mae Jemison

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Mae Jemison is the first Black woman to travel into space. She is an important figure in American history. The article appears to be detailed and well researched.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Lead section: the lead section is concise and summaries the major points of Mae Jemison's career.

Content: the article could use more up to date information on Mae Jemison's current career.

Tone and balance: neutral. The writing does not sway the reader or include any opinions.

Sources and references: the links worked. Details mentioned in the article was well referenced.

Organization and writing quality: the article is well organized.

Images and media: Images included in the article are well captioned.

Talk page discussion: the talk page has some great suggestions that were completed by the editor(s). Including adding more details and removing extraneous media.

Overall impressions: The article needs more information about her time at NASA. Why did she leave NASA just one year after her mission to space to start her own tech research company?