User:Rhs2x/Space Invaders (book)/Kcraven12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rhs2x


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rhs2x/Space Invaders (book)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall your article is really good! It's easy to read and the concept of the story is clear. I think you guys did a nice job on delivering the information without making it biased, and I like how you structured the Summary. I do think you guys could add some more links in the article, such as where it says Space Invaders (I would add the link where you first mention the game in the lead, that way the link is visible earlier than later!) or instead of Pinochet Regime, you could use the link to "Human Rights Violations in Pinochet's Chile". It will give you more background for the readers to look at and follow. However I did see your Military Dictatorship link and that's good! I think it's specifically the Summary section that could use a few links. I know you guys will add more images later so I wont worry about that, and I didn't see any crazy grammatical errors! Well done!