User:Rhya Evans/Women's reproductive health in the United States/Amyzhou314 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Women's reproductive health in the US


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ReedNatalie/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women's reproductive health in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
I copy and pasted over what I wrote on the Talk page in case you didn't see it.

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Hey guys! I think the work you've all done is really amazing and would be a great addition to the Wiki article. I feel like you guys found and included a variety of really good sources. I also found everything you've written to have a neutral tone and was all relevant to the topic. I really don't have much to address other than 2 small details: The sentence on PCOS seems a bit sudden and out of place, if that makes sense. I wonder if it can be placed anywhere else to help improve the flow. Also, linking PCOS to its corresponding Wiki article would be helpful for readers who don't know much about it. The other suggestion is at the bottom for the race and reproductive health section, it could be better to more directly link HIV to women's reproductive health just to make it super clear to anyone reading what the connections are and why it's relevant here. That's it from me! Awesome job guys, I truly enjoyed reading all the new drafted content