User:RiShebaB13/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome/Caitlincaterinichia Peer Review

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User:RiShebaB13
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 * User:RiShebaB13/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome
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 * Pitt–Hopkins syndrome
 * Pitt–Hopkins syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I really enjoyed looking at the edits you have made and the new information you have added to the article thus far. Looking at the first few paragraphs that you have added to, I am glad that you included key information such as "Pitt-Hopkins syndrome is clinically similar to Angelman syndrome, Rett syndrome, and Mowat-Wilson syndrome, and ATR-X syndrome" and "No cure is known for Pitt-Hopkins syndrome, but it is possible to treat associated symptoms". This information is crucial in understanding what Pitt-Hopkins syndrome is and I found this to be very helpful when piecing together certain aspects of this syndrome.

You have also added several new references which are easily accessible when clicked on so you have added them correctly! I feel the pieces you have added do not take away from the flow of the already established article and really the article gains from the bits you have added. I do think under the "typical traits" section you can add the "heavy breathing" into the bulleted points so that those flow a little better! Great job!