User:RiShebaB13/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome/Kptl0304 Peer Review

General info
RiShebaB13
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Article

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would add a period at the end of "Individuals with Pitt-Hopkins syndrome have episodes of heavy breathing". I might also recommend using "they" instead of "he or she" in "If a person shows 9 cardinal features, he or she is classified as having PTHS." Changing the word person to individual is also something I would change. Other than this, I admire the conciseness and detailed updates.