User:RiShebaB13/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome/Nguyenmt1732 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Annaharden
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:RiShebaB13/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pitt–Hopkins syndrome

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Hi!

After looking at your draft, I think that it is very well-organized and thought out. There are a lot of new references that are good and the article does feel more complete with these changes. The tone of the draft was still neutral and went along with the original draft. I especially liked how you added more to the original treatment section since I thought the original was lacking in depth of information. Overall, the draft looked great and I can't wait to see the final version that you come up with.