User:RiShebaB13/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome/Tykerriagrey Peer Review

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I really enjoyed reading this article. I say this because this particular topic in general I have never heard of it, so it was good to learn about something new. I do like how the article was short, brief and to the point. There was one link at the beginning of the article in which it was crossed out; however, the other links within the article worked very fine. Most of the links were hyperlinks and if you did not want to click on the link you didn't have too, in which hovering over the link gave you a short review of what the particular word meant. There was only one picture that was present throughout the article, and the picture was presented very visual and precise. The picture gave insight to the topic in which was spoken on Scoliosis, how its shown within a body. I love this because at times not many people may understand what this may look like. I do feel as if the article was presented in a formal way. Everything flowed well together from beginning to end. The sources within the article was very much up to date as well.