User:RiceIsCool12/Affects of Domestication on Crop Evolution/Mallard23 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(RiceIsCool12)


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 * Editing User:RiceIsCool12/Affects of Domestication on Crop Evolution - Wikipedia


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 * Editing User:RiceIsCool12/Affects of Domestication on Crop Evolution - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Sam,

I think your off to a fantastic start! Looking at your lead section, I believe it was very informative and was complementary to your sections. Thus, my comments are very light in nature. I think some of my comments ask for some examples. For example, when talking about crop domestication give me some examples. I'm sure you can grab some good examples to throw in your sections and that'll give you some more citations to format for your article. Also, I'm sure you know this already, but don't forget your citations and your reference page.

Best regards,

Chason Duck