User:RichardJGrzanka/sandbox

Article Evaluation
I am evaluating the Wikipedia article on Paul's Case


 * The overview of the story starts strangely describing the cultural significance of Pittsburgh and New York (Talk Page)
 * The symbolism part has only three symbols where I think i could find research about a lot more in the story (Talk Page)
 * There is a claim that Paul is homosexual and his suicide is a result of his alienation because of his homosexuality, personally I just don't see a lot of evidence in the story that supports this
 * The citation for the Homosexuality claim leads to a blank page. (Talk Page)
 * I added a piece of information that suggested Paul is narcissistic and cited it to a scholarly article.
 * On the talk page I found some talk about adding a section about Paul's father and their relationship, I replied that I agreed with this.
 * For my copy edit I
 * Changed "bother" to "mother"
 * Fixed some confusing wording in the overview
 * Took out a first person pronoun in the plot summary