User:RickSwordfire17/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Georgian_mafia&action=edit

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This was just one of the three articles that we were assigned to look at.

Evaluate the article
First and foremost, the article focuses largely on the developments that led to the rise of the Georgian Mafia, but it just briefly touches on the criminal organization itself. In addition, the information that does cover the modern developments seems to have stopped around a decade ago. And while there are a decent amount of resources, they are sporadically referenced. Another downfall of this article is that is has no images whatsoever, which takes quite a bit away from the experience of the page. The chronology of the article is solid, but I just wish it was more immersive. All of these problems can be fixed by putting more energy into the smaller aspects of the article -- rather than reshaping the entire piece (which happens to have solid information is decently-written).