User:Rickstru/Plant memory/Noosa.N Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Rickstru


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Rickstru/Plant memory


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Plant memory

Evaluate the drafted changes
Reading the first paragraph, I think the level of details is good. you focused on the definition and editing of the current version on Wikipedia, and I liked the use of simple and understandable language.

I wasn't sure if I completely understand the second paragraph as it is too general, and I wasn't sure what "conserved ways" was referring to. I think if you can find some examples on this or more explanation, it would make it more clear, maybe by mentioning how their environment can affect the ways of memory functions.

I liked how you only stated the two scientific opinions without bias, and how you included that more research is needed in order to know the differences and similarities between plant and animal memory.

Overall, this was really good. It was simple and to the point. I think it would work great for the introduction of an article!